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sekritomgI've never written a big bang fic that turned out good! They all have, like, experimental aspects I'm glad I tried, but in the end they were also all disasters. I wonder why this is? I mean, I wonder if it's the nature of the event, or if I'm maybe just not that great a writer? Like honestly I couldn't tell you.
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Date: 2016-03-05 02:51 (UTC)I personal enjoy the 'journey to be reunited' plot structure of "Walpurgis Night." I attempted something similar with my zine fic. But I suppose that's an easy assessment for an author to make about such a story in retrospect, like, "Ugh, 96% of this story is Character A trying to reach Character B and then that happens at the end and so what." That seems to not take into account the experience of the reader reading it, and the anticipation they share with the protagonist to reach Character B. Ultimately, I would think the most important element in such a story would be for the ending to feel substantial and satisfying for the reader (which I so didn't do in my zine fic lol). As I recall, you did do that with WN. I also liked the fucked up detail of Kyle having bitten Stan's dick? I don't think I'll ever get weird fucking details like that from anyone else in this fandom, and I cherish them.
I loved the hell out of "Not Your Time" so... yeah.
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Date: 2016-03-05 04:48 (UTC)Second of all -- after getting this comment I went back and reread Walpurgis Night. I honestly don't know if I've reread it since it was posted in 2012. I guess it's a lot better than I thought it was, like, structurally you're right that it makes some kind of sense. Something about it is deeply annoying to me, though? Maybe it's just that I wrote the story so I have to feeling somehow detached from it. Also, I wrote it when I was at my most miserable ever, and I remember having no fun writing it and really feeling like "oh shit look at this long slog" so I'm sure some of that influences how I feel when I reread it.
I give myself full props for the dick-biting though! Like, wow, what a concept. I fully commend 2012 Sekrit for handling the dick-biting aspect of Stan and Kyle's marriage with ease and aplomb.
I can't reread "Not Your Time," though, I'm too conscious of where exactly I went wrong! I'm glad to hear you can appreciate it, though, since that's a huge compliment.
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